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The chart below shows the waste disposal in one European Country in four years 2005, 2006, 2007, and 2008

The chart below shows the waste disposal in one European Country in four years 2005, 2006, 2007, and 2008
The given line chart illustrates the data
of
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on
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 contamination which was disposed
in
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of in
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 Europe's one
nation
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European nation
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 over
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a 4-years
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4-years
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4-year
 period from 2005 to 2008.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that they increasingly
burnt
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burned
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,
while
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 the opposite trend was seen in
landfill
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landfills
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. It
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also
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is also
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 clear that the
number
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amount
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 of ocean dumping waste stayed unchanged between 2005 and 2007. Regarding the number of
landfill
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landfills
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 stood at 1800
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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tonnes
-
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,
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was
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it was
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 the highest of
3
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the 3
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elements in 2005. There was a significant plunge after 3 years, from 1800 to 400 units in 2008. In terms of waste
was
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apply
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made by burning, the
figures
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figure
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 was 500 in 2005. It saw a vital growth, from 2005 up to 900 in 2008.
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, after
remained
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remaining
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 the same at 600 tonnes between 2005 and 2007,
sea's
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sea
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 dumps declined slightly to approximately 580
in
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tonnes in
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 2008.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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