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Band 3.5

memorising facts is more important to get success in the studies. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

The most essential part of successful
studing
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studying
 is remembering all
facts
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. I completely disagree with
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 view because we have
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other
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 important aspects
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such
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 as understanding the topic and
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practice
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practising
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 it. One of the key reasons is that understanding the topic
in
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deeper
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a deeper
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 level is more important.
Students
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 should know other key features, details and
evidences
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evidence
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 related to the theme. It is not
enought
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enough
 for dentistry
students
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 to know only 'how many teeth
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people have
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' , so they should learn about the structure of teeth and other information
of
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this
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realm
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field
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.
For instance
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,
according to
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 the research
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 by Cambridge University, 94% of
students
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 who
just
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have just
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 learned
facts
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 about
construction
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the construction
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 of
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an aeromchine
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aeromchine
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aeromachine
 are unable to
constract
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construct
 it in
real
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a real
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 exam
due to
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the
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 lack of
practice
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ability
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apply
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.
Practicing
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 is another clear reason why learning
facts
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 is unworkable. If learners study and memorise only sentences in their head without participating in any
experimantal
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experimental
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,
then
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 in real life they will not
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be able
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 to use their
knowladge
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knowledge
.
Furthemore
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Furthermore
, in recent
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 a number of exams
added
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have added
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 commitment to
practice
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, so by memorising
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facts
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fact
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fact,
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students
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 cannot be
successesful
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successful
 in studies. In NIS,
for example
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, learners
monthly
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apply
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do
practice
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works
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work
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 in subjects
such
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 as biology, chemistry, and physics
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instead
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monthly instead
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 of simple
paper
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works
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 in SAU. In conclusion, I believe that
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students
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students,
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 in order to get high scores in
learning
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learning,
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 should more deeply understand the subject and
do
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apply
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practices
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practice
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instead
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 of just memorising
facts
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.

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task achievement
Your introduction should clearly state your opinion on the topic and outline the main reasons you will discuss.
coherence and cohesion
Make sure the ideas flow logically from one to the next. Use linking words like 'firstly', 'next', and 'finally'.
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When providing examples, explain them a bit more to show how they relate to your points.
task achievement
You have a clear opinion throughout the essay, expressing your disagreement effectively.
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You included examples from studies, which helps to support your points.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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