The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The line chart contrasts historical data on
energy
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consumption from 1980 in the USA and
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projections to 2030 , from a report in 2008. Generally ,almost every
types
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type
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of
the
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apply
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energy
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were
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has
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improved and will keep rising until
2030
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2030,
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expect
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except for
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hydro power ,
while
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the consumption
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petrol and oil remains
the
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at the
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highest level across the entire period. Petrol and oil ,coal and natural gas
accounts
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account
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for traditional
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energy
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energy,
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have
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which has
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taken over half of
consumption
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the consumption
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.Particularly ,petrol and oil emissions
were got
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ranked
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the
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first rank of 35
quadrillion
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in 1980 and
reach
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reached
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a peak
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of
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approximately 50
quadrillion
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in 2030.Coal and natural gas spent 15
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and 20
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respectively
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, respectively
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in
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, in
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1980 and showed only a slight difference until 2030. New
energy
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sources
including
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, including
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nuclear ,solar/wind and hydro power
account
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, account
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for a
rarely
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relatively
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in
energy
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cost.They all got
a
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the
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same value at around 5
quadrillion
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in 1980 and will not
over
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go over
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10
quadrillion
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in 2030
according to
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the prediction.Hydro power is the lowest among all
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while
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, while
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showing a little decrease.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, quadrillion with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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