The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.
The graph illustrates the consumption of various
energy
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sources in the USA over a 50-year period.
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, there were noticeable changes, and the consumption of coal is expected to grow,
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the use of solar/wind, hydropower and nuclear
energy
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will remain minimal. In
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petrol and oil will continue to be the highest
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source in the USA In terms of petrol and oil, compared with nuclear, the number for petrol and oil started at 35 in 1980, rose steadily after a slight decline, and
it
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projected to reach around 48
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quadrillion
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by 2030. The figure for nuclear accounted for roughly four in 1980. Nuclear
energy
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saw a slow increase, and it is anticipated to represent approximately eight in the final year. Regarding Coal and Natural Gas, compared with hydropower and solar/wind, natural gas started at 20
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, experienced some fluctuations, and is projected to
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at around 25
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units
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. Coal began at 15
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and increased gradually, with it expected to reach about 30
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by 2030. The numbers for Solar/Wind and Hydropower remained relatively stable at very low levels throughout the period, between three and six
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units
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, units, quadrillion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Renewable resources
  • Non-renewable resources
  • Fossil fuels
  • Nuclear power
  • Hydroelectric power
  • Solar energy
  • Wind energy
  • Biomass
  • Consumption patterns
  • Technological advancements
  • Energy efficiency
  • Sustainable development
  • Carbon footprint
  • Energy policy
  • Projections
  • Decade
  • Significant shifts
  • Economic factors
  • Environmental impact
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