The line graph illustrates the energy consumption in
United
States between 1980 Correct article usage
the United
to
2030 ,based on a report from 2008.
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and
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it is clear that
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number
of petrol and oil Use synonyms
increase
continuously in the whole operation and Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
peaking
at first. At Wrong verb form
peaks
first
the Add a comma
first,
amounts
of coal was less than the natural Check wording
amount
gas
. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the amounts of coal will overcome the natural Linking Words
gas
and be the second energy Use synonyms
in
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source in
figure
. The Correct article usage
the figure
number
of nuclear ,solar/wind and hydropower fluctuated after 1990.
The consumption of petrol and oil increased Use synonyms
instability
before 1990 Rephrase
steadily
and
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, and
then
it Linking Words
will
rapid growth to Wrong verb form
experienced
the
highest at 47quadrillion units Correct article usage
its
2030
.The Change preposition
in 2030
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number
of coal overtook the Check wording
amount
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number
of natural Check wording
amount
gas
at 23 quadrillion Use synonyms
unites
during 1995 and 2000 and will witness a dramatic increase to 2030. Use the right word
units
While
the natural Linking Words
gas
will remain stable from 2015.
The consumption of nuclear ,solar/wind and hydropower kept in a same level at 4 quadrillion unites before1990, Use synonyms
then
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number
of nuclear Use synonyms
will
increased Use the right word
units
over
to 5 quadrillion Change preposition
apply
unites
in 2030.Correct your spelling
units