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The maps show the changes in Liverton docks between 1980 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(14.06.25)

The maps show the changes in Liverton docks between 1980 and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.(14.06.25)
The diagrams illustrate the current state of Liverton docks and how
it
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they
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 used to be in 1980.
Overall
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, Liverton docks witnessed the disappearance of
ships
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 and cranes and the replacement of
waehouses
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warehouses
for
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with
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 facilities for people’s
life
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lives
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. In 1980, there was a
river
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 which ran from west to east, located
in
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apply
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between
two
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 banks. Several
ships
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 moved on the
river
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as
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, as
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 they are the main means of transportation. On the northern side of the
river
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,
two
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waehouses
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warehouses
 were separated by
two
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 cranes placed in between each
waehouse
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warehouse
. On the opposite
bank
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, a crane was located in the south-eastern corner of the
dorks
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docks
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, with another
waehouse
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warehouse
 built right next to it. There was
also
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 a way to the coast on
this
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 side of the dorks. Currently, Liverton docks are recorded with the removal of
ships
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on
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from
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 the
river
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. A flood barrier is
bult
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built
 to protect residents
and
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, and
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 a bridge is built to connect the northern
bank
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 and the southern
bank
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.
Instead
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 of seeing
ships
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 travelling on the
river
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, residents can visit a newly built ship museum. On the northern
bank
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, the
two
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waehouses
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warehouses
 are replaced by an education centre and a
kid’s
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kids’
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 playground. There is a new sailing club located
in
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apply
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between the
two
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 new facilities. On the southern
bank
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, the crane is replaced by a hotel and an apartment and a parking lot are constructed with the removal of the
waehouse
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warehouse
.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words ships, river, two, bank with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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