The maps below show the changes in area after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

The maps below show the changes in area after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the changes in area after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
The maps below give information about the changes in the construction
area
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of a hydroelectric power dam.
Overall
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, there were lots of changes between
area
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in 1980 and
area
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in 2000 years especially . There have been a lot of changes in the middle of the lake was built
instead
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of a river. Beginning from the
Area
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in 1980, there was a long river crossed by all the constructions and buildings. On the west side, there was a forest which was covered by trees, and close to that were ancient structures,
although
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there were lots of
mountains
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and rare plants and animals, and there were many
mountains
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.
Furthermore
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, on the right side, there was the biggest irrigated farmland and next to it was a small village, and there were the biggest
mountains
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. In 2000, almost everything changed.
Firstly
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, the river became larger than previous ones , and the mountain was replaced by a castle and a forest. And there were no rare plants and animals on that replaced ship with lots of fish in the lake. And on the east side, there was a village , and it became a large Hotel, and the village was replaced close to electricity.
Although
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there was a new construction that they built a hydroelectric dam between the two largest
mountains
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. And there were
also
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new constructions, and the electricity was built.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, mountains with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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