Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
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task response
Your introduction clearly states your belief, but it could be clearer about the arguments you will present. Try to outline your main points in the introduction.
coherence and cohesion
You have some good ideas, but try to make your points clearer. Use simple words to explain your thoughts fully. Each point should connect back to the main idea of your essay.
coherence and cohesion
Your conclusion summarizes your ideas well, but it could be stronger. You might restate your main argument more directly and show why it matters.
task achievement
You have presented a clear opinion on the topic, which is important for task response.
task achievement
Your essay includes both sides of the argument, which shows good understanding of the topic.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite