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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many countries,
governments
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 place great importance on economic growth as a sign of national success.
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, some people argue that other forms of
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,
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 as education, health, and environmental protection, are equally essential.
This
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 essay will discuss both sides of the argument and explain why I believe that a balanced approach is the best way for a country to develop. There are strong reasons why many
governments
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 focus mainly on economic
progress
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. A strong economy provides more job opportunities and improves people’s living standards. With higher tax income,
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 can
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 invest in better infrastructure
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 as roads, schools, and hospitals.
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, economic stability helps a country compete internationally and attract foreign investment. For these reasons, many leaders consider economic development the foundation of national strength.
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, focusing only on the economy can lead to serious social and environmental problems. Without
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 in education and healthcare, people may not enjoy real improvements in quality of life.
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, rapid industrial growth can cause pollution and damage natural resources. Countries like China and India,
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, have faced severe air pollution partly
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 their economic expansion.
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, social and environmental
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 is equally important for sustainable development.
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 I agree that economic growth is vital, I believe other types of
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 should not be ignored. Economic success without good education, healthcare, or environmental protection cannot ensure long-term stability or happiness for citizens. A truly successful nation must develop in all these areas together. In conclusion,
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 economic
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 is essential for a country’s prosperity, it should not come at the expense of social and environmental well-being.
Governments
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 should aim for balanced
progress
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 to build a strong, fair, and sustainable society.

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structure
Use one main idea per paragraph. State the idea in a simple line at the start of each paragraph. Keep short sentences.
content
Add more proof or facts to back the point. Use numbers or real facts when you can.
conclusion
End with a strong restatement of your view and the reason for it.
content
Clear view on the issue with a good plan to cover both sides.
coherence
Good linking words that show contrast (however, on the other hand).
Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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