The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The data illustrates how aluminium can be recycled.
Overall
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, the recycling action for aluminium cans moves in a long process, which starts from the collection car,
then
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the cleaning and the melting process until it is reshaped and you find it as a new one in the store. The process starts from used cans in the recycling box,
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it is moved by the collection car to the cleaning , sorting, shredding and compressing development in the factory. After that, start the heating until it becomes fully melted into a liquid at a very high heat , and
then
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another line . After that, it compresses to rolls between 2.5 and 6 meters.
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the shape's operation in a machine until it starts to
become
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looks
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like the can size ,
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after that starts another line of the filling
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In
in contrast
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, it becomes fully recycled and it has been recycled by 74% in the UK.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Collection phase
  • Recycling facility
  • Cleaning process
  • Contaminants
  • Shredding stage
  • High-temperature furnace
  • Melting process
  • Liquid aluminium
  • Molds
  • Ingot
  • Solidification
  • Aluminium sheets
  • Recycling efficiency
  • Conservation of raw materials
  • Energy conservation
  • Degradation of quality
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