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Writing Samples
Band 5

An English-speaking friend wants to spend a two-week holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere for your friend to stay give advice about what to do and see in your area give information about what clothes to bring You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Maria,

Dear Maria, I hope you are alright, I have
readed
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read
 your
massage
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message
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 about your future trip. I would give you some tips about my region. There are a lot of places to visit, but I think two
week
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weeks
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 will be ok. So I will try to
reccomend
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recommend
 you
best
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the best
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 and
cheap
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cheapest
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accomodation
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accommodation
 in my town.
Firstly
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, do not forget to take
sport
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sports
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 clothes with you, as here is located one of the best tracking
route
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routes
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. You will need
comfortable
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a comfortable
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 water-resistant jacket and track
suit
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tracksuit
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. But mainly good mountain shoes are needed. I think I could give you all
other
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the other
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 equipment, so
dont
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don't
 take it with you.
Secondly
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, I am already prepared list of
sightsings
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sights
, ten or fifteen places to visit. Here we have five
musems
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museums
 and one
theater
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theatre
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. I suggest you
to
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apply
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visit them all.
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Moreover
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Moreover,
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 we have the best restaurant in our region, where you could try local food. Do not worry about
hotel
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the hotel
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, I have already booked for your stay with
great
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a great
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 discount as a local. Dear, I can not wait
the
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for the
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 time when we meet! Prepare for
unforgettable
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an unforgettable
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 holiday in your life! Take care, Max

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organization
Start with a clear hello and tell what you will write about. Use one idea in one paragraph.
language
Use simple words. Check spell and end.
planning
Group ideas in order: stay, do and see, dress.
grammar
Be careful with grammar. Use a period and capital in right spots.
content
You have a kind tone and show care for friend.
content
You give useful ideas about what to do and what to wear.
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