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Band 1

It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. how could robots be used in future? Will this development be a positive or negative develpoment?

the
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The
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robots
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this
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these
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 days are
important as
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as important
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mauch
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apply
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as
the
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apply
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human
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humans
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. It's a
replace
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 of
human
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humans
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 in
diffrant
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different
 things .
the
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The
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robots
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 in future will become the
shif
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shift
,
garson
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the garson
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 and
teacher
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the teacher
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 .
they
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They
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 will be the helper, we will not be searching for
persons
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people
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 in the stores .
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on
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 the other
hand
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hand,
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now a day on
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nowadays in
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 my country
they
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, they
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used
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use
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the
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apply
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robots
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 for ads in
the
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apply
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store
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stores
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such
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, such
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 as a new food
for
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to
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 try .
on
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On
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other
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the other
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hand
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hand,
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 when the
robots
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come
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come,
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 they will be a negative development
it
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apply
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.
Example
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For example
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the
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, the
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 stores will not be searching for employees .
the
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The
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 human will not have enough money and
sursies
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resources
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 to live with it .
in
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In
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conclusion
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conclusion,
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 it is important to
developed
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develop
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in
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apply
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the country as much as it is important to handle
the
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apply
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both
side
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sides
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planning
Plan the essay before you write. Start with a short line on what you will say. Then use 2 or 3 clear ideas in the body, one idea per paragraph. End with a short sum up.
linking
Use small linking words to join ideas. Words like first, also, but, however, and in addition help the flow.
content
Explain each idea with one clear example. Do not go off topic.
language
Check spell and grammar. Practice the common words you use most.
content
Some ideas are shown, like how robots may help in future.
structure
There is a closing line to sum up.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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