The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

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and

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across eight regions.

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, only North America, Europe, and Rich Asia-Pacific recorded disproportionately higher levels of

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despite relatively small populations. Meanwhile, the remaining regions had much larger

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shares compared with their proportions of

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. In China,

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accounted for the highest percentage at approximately 23%, its proportion of

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was considerably smaller, at just 3%. A similar pattern was seen in the Other Asia-Pacific region, which stood at 17% of the global

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but only 3% of global

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Europe and India

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a similar percentage of the global

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(at around 15%), Europe's proportion of

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was far greater, at nearly 30%, compared with 2% for India.

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, North America recorded the largest proportion of global

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at 34%, followed by Rich Asia-Pacific at 24%, with these regions representing 6% and 5% of the world's

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, respectively.

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, Africa accounted for exactly 10% of the world's

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its share of

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2%. Latin America and the Caribbean had a smaller

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and less than 5% of global

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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

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