The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.

The line graph compares the share of Australian exports sent to

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, the US,

China

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and India between 1990 and 2012.

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China

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shows an upward trend

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both steep and sustained, eventually becoming the prevailing market.

Japan

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, once dominant, underwent a steady decline and

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stabilised. The US fluctuated before dipping markedly in the late 2000s,

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India accounted for only a small portion throughout, though it rose in the 2000s. In detail, exports to

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fell significantly from about 26% in 1990 to 20% in 1995,

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to roughly 18% in 2000–2005, before edging down to around 17% in 2010 and 2012.

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by contrast

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, grew from roughly 2% in 1990 to 5% in 2000, accelerated to about 11% in 2005,

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surged to 25% in 2010, peaking near 28% in 2012. The US started at around 11%, slipped to 8% in 1995, recovered to about 11% by 2000, and

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plunged to roughly 5% in 2010 before a modest rise to 7% in 2012. India remained negligible until 2000 (about 1%), after which it increased gradually to around 6–7% in 2010, followed by a slight drop to approximately 5% in 2012. In sum, Australia’s export profile shifted decisively towards

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over the period,

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the relative importance of

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and the US declined.

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The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

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