A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at institution or organisation as part of their program. what are the advantages and disadvantages of the type of course requirement? give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

A lot of scholars in many undergrad programs are required to undertake a period of non-income-based
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in companies affiliated with their school. The advantage of the following type of course is the ability to gain real-world experience, and the disadvantage is the financial strain faced by
students
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. On the one hand, it is beneficial for
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to gain real-world experience.
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approach helps them connect their theoretical knowledge to practical knowledge found at
work
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.
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, student nurses who get to
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in hospitals would practise how to take temperature, check BP, inject medication and change bandages of real patients.
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solidifies the skills being gained in their field of
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or program in which they are studying.
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, it becomes a financial burden for the student to go and come back from
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. Most undergraduates do not come from well-to-do families, thereby transport and food funds become a problem for them.
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, my niece studying Biomedical engineering, was required to go for internships at a hospital institution out of town. To avoid too many expenses,
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as rental fees, she would board two buses every day to reach her destination.
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, she should constantly ask for money from her family to help her pay for her transport and food. In conclusion, even though real-world experience is important, it is not easy to undertake unpaid
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from organisations as it causes financial burdens on
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. Organisations should consider paying a small remuneration to help in
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regard and resolve the challenges
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face.

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Real life examples are shown (nurses, a niece).
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Uses on the one hand and on the other hand to link ideas.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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