The pie chart shows the browser usage on wikimedia for the year 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the browser usage on wikimedia for the year 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie chart shows the browser usage on wikimedia for the year 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart depicts the use of the browser on Wikimedia in 2011.
Overall
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,
I.E.
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IE
was the most used browser,
while
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Android accounted for the smallest share. It is remarkable that just three
browsers
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occupied the vast majority of the
usage
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. Looking at the details, Chrome and Firefox had similar
usage
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shares, with 22.2% and 23.5%, respectively.
In contrast
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, Internet Explorer had the greatest
usage
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rate at 29.15%, which was 30 times more than that of the least popular browser. These three
browsers
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alone accounted for roughly three-quarters of the
overall
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total
usage
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rates at 74.85%. In terms of the less popular
browsers
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, Safari made up 12.52% of the total, which was more than twice as high as Opera at 5.3%. The proportion of users of Android
browsers
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was only 2.87%, making it the smallest category
overall
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.
In addition
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, other
browsers
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combined accounted for 4.46% of the entire total
usage
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words browsers, usage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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