You are a member of an International Students' club. The club is organizing an event to celebrate popular food from around the world. Write a letter to the event organizer, Luis. In your letter •Offer to make a popular dish from your country •Describe what this dish is •Explain why it should be included in the event

Dear Mr. Luis, I hope

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message finds you well. I am Leila Tabrizian, one of the International Students’ Club members. I am writing to you regarding the event which is going to be held to celebrate popular food from around the world. Since I am an Iranian student, in my country, there are a lot of famous foods not only from different tribs but

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from different geographical sites. So, if you give me permission, I can prepare one of these cuisins, which is called ‘Tahchin’ in

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event. The aforementioned cuisine can be made in two forms: with meat or with chicken.

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, after meat or chicken becomes tasty, they should be placed on a layer of rice at the bottom of a pot, which has been mixed with yoghurt, saffron, and egg. I think having

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dish in the event menu can be a good idea, because it is so delicious, and the event’s visitors will experience a unique taste from Iranian tradition. I am highly thankful that you spent time reading my letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Leila Tabrizian.

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Sep 1, 2025

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language

Fix small spelling and form mistakes (tribes, cuisine) and clean word choice.

structure

Make some sentences shorter and clearer.

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Be more direct at the start by naming the dish you will cook for the event.

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End with a short thank you and simple sign-off.

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Clear offer to cook a dish for the event

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Gives a description of the dish and how it is made

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States why the dish fits the event and can be valued by guests

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