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The pie charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.

The pie charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library on the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
The provided pie charts illustrate the survey results of
students
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' satisfaction with the university library's IT services and its opening hours.
According to
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 the data, most of the full-timers are satisfied with their services,
while
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 the part-timers' survey reported
conversely
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.
Additionally
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, both
students
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 are pleased with the library's opening hours. As shown in the first question, more than half of the full-time pupils are very happy with the IT support, and those who are not satisfied account for 13%.
In contrast
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, only 20% of part-time
students
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 are pleased, and the majority of them feel content, at 45%. Interestingly, both quite delighted pupils are at a relatively similar number, at around one-third. Moving to the next question, both full-time and part-time
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students
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students'
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opinion
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opinions
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 are similar. The proportion of those who feel happy about the library's opening hours is comparable, at 67% and 72%, respectively. Notably, fewer than 5% of each pupil is not contented.

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