The following maps show recent archaeological findings at historic site in the year 2004 and 2014.

The given maps illustrate the changes in archaeological findings at a monumental area between 2004 and 2014.

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while

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an ancient temple remained unchanged over the decades, some new constructions were added in order to modernise the traditional area. In 2004, the heritage spot was really simple,

due to

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the fact that

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there were almost two buildings and some trees.

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, the mountains were clearly visible behind an ancient house. In 2014, there is no doubt that

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some changes have enhanced the surroundings.

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, a traditional stadium was built to celebrate diverse traditional events

such

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as football, running and other types of sports , which resulted in the cutting down of some trees.

Moreover

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, the number of heritage buildings increased, and an ancient toilet was planned nearby them during the development. The most significant change among these developments

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the construction of a historic palace.

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, the mountains that were present in 2004 disappeared from the later plan.

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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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