In
modern era, a number of school children spend numerous hours on technological devices
as smartphones.
phenomenon stems from technological development and social media addiction. Even though
situation seems beneficial for their well-being, I believe that
trend is rather negative because of health risks and loss of precious time to study.
with, there are several reasons why they spend a lot of time on their phones.
, using phones is inextricably linked with their lives, including in
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lives and even in school. These youngsters need to possess the devices so that they can communicate with their friends and parents,
occasionally search for things mentioned in classes when their teachers allow them to look them up.
, social media is
a huge contributor to the use of the Internet. Owing to the proliferation and the algorithm of social media, it became a place where they can not only express themselves, but
seek their interests and stimulation, which are less available in their daily lives,
as taking a look at their favourite idols and sharing their interests with their friends.
Turning to the disadvantages of
development, one of them is health issues. Excessive exposure to the Internet can negatively affect their physical and mental problems ,
as obesity and anxiety.
is because it can prevent them from playing outside and contacting other people in the real world. Another is that being on a phone every day might discourage them from studying, because it is
an addiction that it is difficult for them to decide when to quit and start studying. To illustrate
,
a recent study, the average score for the entrance exam of Osaka University in 2020 was lower than that of 2010, with a 15% gap.
In conclusion, the usage of smartphones is pivotal for young generations , and it is inevitable for them to use the gadgets as a measure
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communication and for leisure time. I think that
is a negative development since it may harm their bodies and can hinder their academic success.