You recently booked a part-time course at a college. You now need to cancel your booking. Write a letter to the college administrator. In your letter: Say which part-time course you booked Explain why you need to cancel your booking Ask about booking a different course

Dear M I am writing to inform you that I want to cancel my business management course as a part-time

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I enrolled

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month. Unfortunately, there is a change in my work schedule, and a new distribution of the employees. My manager gave me the night shift, which conflicts with the course timing.

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, I am still interested in working part-time. Could you please recommend any alternative courses that are available between morning and afternoon

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, thank you for your assistance

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I apologise for bothering you. Yours faithfully, Maryam

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Sep 8, 2025

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Be clear at the start that you want to cancel your course and give any booking date or number if you have it.

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Ask for other course times, such as morning or afternoon, and how to book them.

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Polite and friendly tone

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Reason for cancel is clear

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Requests for other courses are made

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

90 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time course
Cancellation
Booking
Administrator
Financial situation
Work commitments
Health issues
Inconvenience
Transfer
Subject area
Schedule
Format
Cancellation policy
Refund process
Assistance
Understanding

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