The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1994 and 2004. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table illustrates the price for a banana in four different countries, from 1994 to 2004. From an
overall
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perspective.
It is clear that
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Japan have the highest price for each kilogram,
while
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USA
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the USA
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is the lowest.
Furthermore
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, Germany and France prices are
on
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in
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the middle, not too
hight
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high
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or too low. Looking at the chart in more detail, beginning with Japan, it started at 2.00$ per kilogram,
then
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rising
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rose
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dramatically
reaching
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, reaching
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3.00$
at
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in
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1995, their peak.
However
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, not too long
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untill
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until
it significantly decreased and came back
at
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apply
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almost
the
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to the
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same
as
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level as
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before, in 1996. From 1996 to 1999, it
remaind
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remained
steady at 2.00$.
Although
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in 2000 it faced a slight drop reaching around 1.50$, and
then
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rising again
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untill
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until
reaching around 2.50$ in 2004. Next is France, starting
steady
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steadily
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at approximately 1.55$ in 1994,
then
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facing a drop in 1999, reaching around 1.40$, not too long until increasing back again, reaching around 1.58$ in 2001, as it is their peak.
then
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dramatically slipping
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untill
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until
reaching 1.00$ in 2003.
However
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, it rose back again to 1.50$ in 2004. Moving to Germany, starting at around 1.50$ per kilogram, and
then
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steadly
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steadily
rising and dropping throughout the years,
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untill
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until
in 2002 it reached around 1.00$, and stayed there till the final year.
Finally
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,
Usa
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USA
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, starting under 1.00$,
then
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rising to reach about 1.25$ in 1995, their peak, and
remaind
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remained
steady throughout the years.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words untill with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Trend
  • Fluctuate
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stable/Stability
  • Significant
  • Gradual
  • Sharp
  • Slight
  • Peak
  • Plummet
  • Spike
  • Level off
  • Dip
  • Plateau
  • Cost
  • Price
  • Currency
  • Decade
  • Year-on-year
  • Economic factors
  • Consumer demand
  • Inflation
  • Market forces
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