The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.

The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below illustrate the number of journal articles read per week by all students, PhD students, and junior lecturers at an Australian university.
The pie charts present the proportion of academic learners at an Australian University who read a certain number of scientific publications weekly.
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, journal consumption rose with academic level. PhD
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accounted for far more extensive journal reading than either all
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or junior lecturers. Among all
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, about 67% fell into the one-to-five range, representing the largest share in
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group. A
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21% consulted six to eleven journals,
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only 12%
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more than twelve.
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, the largest proportion of PhD
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accessed over a dozen journals per week, standing at 80%,
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just 5% referred to fewer than five. Another 15% of PhD
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read between six and eleven publications. As for junior lecturers, about
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three-quarters
were in the six-to-eleven categories, compared with the 24% who read more than twelve per week. Meanwhile, a small minority of 1% learned as few as one to five articles.

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