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In next centuries, people will not tend to buy both paper books and newspapers to read or learn. We will satisfy with reading e-books which will not require any money from us in these days. I believe that this type of reading that has got more advantages is more convenient to understand fast.

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Introduction
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people
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People
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alwes
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always
 find
defrend
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different
 ways to make life easy.
they
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They
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are readig
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readig
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reading
 and
explore
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exploring
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.
Linking Words
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Also
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also
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also,
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 the
tecnolagy
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technology
help
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helps
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 us to do it .
Linking Words
for
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For
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example
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example,
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people
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 in
past
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the past
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 used to read books and
news paper
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newspapers
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but
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, but
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 now all
this
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being
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is
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 on ai way .
Body · 1
on
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 one
hand
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hand,
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people
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 in past had
a
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apply
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some of difcullt on get news.
Linking Words
for
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For
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example
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example,
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 they went to
store
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the store
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for bought
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to buy
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 a
newspapaer
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newspaper
.
Linking Words
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Also
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also
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also,
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 they used to listen to the radio.
Linking Words
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Moreover
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moreover
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moreover,
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 the most famous activity to do is read books.
all
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All
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 that things had
an
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a
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god
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good
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 effect.
its
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It
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help
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helps
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 us to have
a
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apply
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some great
skeals
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skills
 like reading
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, listning
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listning
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listening
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, ans
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ans writning
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and writing
.
Body · 2
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on
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On
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 the other
hand
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hand,
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people
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 in
futare
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Futare
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 may have
medern
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modern
 ways to get information.
we
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We
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 will have the world on one
devise
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device
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. phones can be the only thing we need. like
read
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reading
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 books and
listen
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listening
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 to
news
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the news
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.
tv
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TV
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 will be
use
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used
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instate
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instead
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 of radio.
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Also
alse
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alse,
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 we will save our money.
Conclusion
in
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In
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 the
end
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end,
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i
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I
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 see that modern ways help us to save money and make our
life
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lives
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easy
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easier
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.

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organization
Work on one idea per paragraph and give clear example for it.
grammar
Use simple spellings and check common errors to be understood.
structure
Add a clear intro and a short conclusion.
coherence
Use a few linking words to show how ideas go from one to next.
grammar
Practice writing with correct verbs and plural s.
structure
You show a plan to talk about old and new ways.
content
There is a sense of future change in tech.
content
You use examples from past to present.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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