The maps below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today.

The maps compare the grounds of a

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in 1950 with its present form.

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, the

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has undergone major transformations, with new commercial, residential, and recreational facilities added. The main track running across the

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has been replaced by a road. To the south of the road, a camping field has been established adjacent to newly

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panel areas, occupying the area that was formerly used for sheep grazing. Parking areas have

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been added, first in the northwest corner and another on the eastern side. The barn is now located at the southern end of the triangular road junction,

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its previous site across from the eastern parking lot has been redeveloped into holiday cottages. Meanwhile, both the chicken

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remain in the same locations. The fruit trees, soft fruits, and vegetable plots have

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also

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preserved in their original positions along the river, with soft fruits lying between the vegetables and fruit trees.

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, a

farm

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shop has been built in the fruit trees area.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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168 words

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