The maps below show the site of a farm in 1950 and the same site today.

The maps compare the grounds of a
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in 1950 with its present form.
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, the
farm
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has undergone major transformations, with new commercial, residential, and recreational facilities added. The main track running across the
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has been replaced by a road. To the south of the road, a camping field has been established adjacent to newly
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panel areas, occupying the area that was formerly used for sheep grazing. Parking areas have
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been added, first in the northwest corner and another on the eastern side. The barn is now located at the southern end of the triangular road junction,
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its previous site across from the eastern parking lot has been redeveloped into holiday cottages. Meanwhile, both the chicken
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remain in the same locations. The fruit trees, soft fruits, and vegetable plots have
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also
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preserved in their original positions along the river, with soft fruits lying between the vegetables and fruit trees.
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, a
farm
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shop has been built in the fruit trees area.

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