The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site

The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site
The maps illustrate the current layout of an industrial
site
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and the proposed redevelopment plan to transform it into a residential
area
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.
Overall
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, the industrial buildings and facilities
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such
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, such
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as the factory, offices, storage, and
canteen
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canteen,
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will be completely removed and replaced by housing units, communal amenities, and parking spaces. The
site
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will shift from an industrial to a residential purpose with a more
organized
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and community-friendly layout. At present, the
site
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contains several office buildings, a factory in the northeast, storage space in the southwest, and a canteen. There is
also
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a large parking
area
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on the western side,
along with
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an entrance and reception facing Chimney Road. A central yard occupies the middle of the
site
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.
In contrast
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, the redevelopment plan shows that these facilities will be replaced by residential housing and supporting infrastructure. A four-bedroom house will be built in the southwest corner,
while
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a three-bedroom house will be located in the northwest. The central
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will be redesigned into communal gardens surrounded by a row of smaller two-bedroom houses. On the eastern side, a block of apartments and a large parking
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will be constructed.
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, a private road with parking garages will run through the southern part of the
site
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, providing access from Swallow Street.

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