You have recently moved to a different house/apartment. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: – Explain why you have moved – Describe the new house/apartment – Invite him/her to pay you a visit.

Dear Kevin, How're you doing! It's been a long time, we haven't talked! Anyway, I am glad to share some exciting things about my new

house

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, and I'm writing to invite you to my housewarming party.

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, as you know that I've been looking for a new job in Barrie, ON, and

finally

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, I got one, and luckily, I found

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beautiful detached

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in the heart of the city, very close to the Fairview Mall. It has a spacious living room, 3 master bedrooms and a huge kitchen, where I can spend a plethora of my time, especially cooking. To add to

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this

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new

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is just 15 15-minute drive away from my workplace,

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I can utilise some extra time in pursuing my hobbies. To my surprise, my

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has a small backyard too, where I can grow some plants. Anyways, I am hosting a small party in that backyard with a few relatives and some close friends. You're invited. The party's coming Saturday, and I hope you can make it. I'm eager to see you. Best regards, Ketul

ketulshah2825

Sep 26, 2025

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improvement

Try to use short, clear lines. End ideas with a full stop.

structure

Put one idea in each paragraph and start a new line for a new idea.

style

Keep a friendly feel but cut long words and long sentences.

tone

The note is friendly and warm.

content

It covers all three parts: why you moved, what the new place is like, and an invite.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

183 words

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You have recently moved to a different house/apartment. Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter: – Explain why you have moved – Describe the new house/apartment – Invite him/her to pay you a visit.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

some people think the government should invest money in teaching science than other subjects in order to for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe bskills and experience are more important. Discuss bot sides and give your opinion.