The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.

The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
The flow chart illustrates the progress of the
bricks
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were
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that were
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produced by the building manufacturers. There were seven stages in the process. Throughout the process, which began with the digger digging the clay
,
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and ended with the
bricks
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being delivered by trucks. The first step was that the clay was dug by
excavator
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an excavator
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,
then
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put
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the metal grid
on
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was put on
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the roller.
Following
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this
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, these materials were mixed with sand and water in order to divide into two categories, one was
wire
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a wire
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cutter
the
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, the
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other was
mould
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a mould
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. After that, all of the
bricks
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were heated in a drying oven for around 24 hours to 48 hours.
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, the
bricks
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were kilned at a moderate temperature ( about 200
degrees
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to 990
degrees
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), before staying in the cooling chamber, which took two or three days, and the
bricks
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needed to pass by a higher temperature than before ( approximately 870
degrees
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to 1300
degrees
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). In the final step, all the
bricks
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were packaged and piled by the industries to transport
to
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apply
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everywhere
,
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apply
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which needed
it
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them
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words bricks, degrees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • manufacture
  • bricks
  • building industry
  • process
  • dig
  • prepare
  • clay
  • mold
  • shape
  • dry
  • fire
  • kiln
  • cool
  • package
  • fired
  • overview
  • importance
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