more and more people are relying on the private car as their means of transportation. Describe some of the problems oreliance on cars can cause, and suggest at leats 1 possible solution.

As
people
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prefer using
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individual cars
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car
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than
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rather than
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transportation,
less
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fewer
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and
less
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fewer
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people
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are choosing public transportation, leading to
serveral
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several
problem
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problems
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in society
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this
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essay will explore
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to their possible solutions.
popularity
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The popularity
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of private
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car
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cars
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among citizens has
lead
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to many problems. Foremost among these is
some
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that some
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type
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types
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of
individuals
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individual cars
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car
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are harmful to
environment
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the environment
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, which
provide
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produces
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a
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apply
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dust and
polution
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pollution
that could lead to global warming.
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, it would be
disadvantaged
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disadvantageous
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to
citizens
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citizens'
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physical
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health
.
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, because fewer
people
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using
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use
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a
plubictransportation
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transportation
,
it
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there
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may
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will
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be no longer
no
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a
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need and
will
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it will
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be gone
im
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in
the
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future
.
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, because of
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reason
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it could lead to
lack
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a lack
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of
country's
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the country's
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financial because if
less
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fewer
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people
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using
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use
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public
transportation
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transportation,
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the government will
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lose
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income from
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part.
However
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, there are clear solutions for private
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car
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cars
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, should governments and countries want to follow them.
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, an
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law
of
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using electric
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car
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cars
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should be
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and
use
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used
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in these modern days because it
not
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does not
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provide any
polutions
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pollution
, so it
not
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is not
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harmful to the environment either. Another reason is that the government could
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focus
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on improving
others
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other
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facilities
instead
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.
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, developing
public
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a public
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spot
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space
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such
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as
public
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a public
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park, they could add new functions that
need to subscribe
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memberships, so they could find a new target from
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part. In conclusion,
although
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the
myraid
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myriad
of problems
result
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resulting
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from private
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car
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cars
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are
apparents
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apparent
, these are problems with clear solutions, should governments want to try them. In my
oppinion
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opinion
, if
people
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continue to
private
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use private
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car
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cars
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. The repercussions on
spciety
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society
are going to be
long- lasting
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and disastrous.

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task
Explain the problems and the solutions a lot clearer, with two or three real ideas.
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language
Use simple, correct sentences. Check spelling and grammar.
structure
Intro and conclusion are there.
content
Some ideas show how cars can affect life.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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