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Band 2.5

Some people believe that it is better to accept bad situations, such as unsatisfactory Jobs and shortage of money . Others argue that it is better to try to improve the situations . Discuss both views and give your own opinion ?

There is no denying the fact that all people face various
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difficult situations.
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 it is a commonly held belief that the
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 way to deal with bad situations is
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, there is
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 an argument that the best solution is to develop
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attitudes
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.
This
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 essay will analyse
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 topic from both points of view and express my opinion. On one hand, accepting these cases
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 a crucial role
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, there
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a significant
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, the majority of hard
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 in the first place need time to improve.
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, if
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a person
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works
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a company
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 and he
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to
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any thing
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 happening that will bother his colleagues.
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 the other hand, others think improving it
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 for the
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society
. It is
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nagative
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negative
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ones can
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 be good for us in the future.
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,
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this
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 problems can
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 health issues.
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 the Saudi Ministry of Health
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people
 who face numerous
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bad situations
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 issues in mental health. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to
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 question. On balance,
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, I tend to believe that
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improvement
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 in all our problems, but
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 the right time.

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structure
Make your position clear in the introduction and restate it in the conclusion. Stick to one main view and link each paragraph to it.
content
Develop ideas clearly. Each paragraph should give a point and a short, real example. This will make the answer stronger.
language
Check spelling and grammar. Many words are mis-spelled and some sentences are hard to read.
structure
The essay tries to discuss both sides.
content
There is an overall attempt to answer the prompt.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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