The table below gives informarion about students studying in six departures at a Australian university in 2011

The table compares the percentages of

students

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in six university departments in Australia in 2011,

according to

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gender, first

language

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, and country of birth.

Overall

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, female

students

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were dominant in

language

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-related subjects,

whereas

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science fields had a much lower proportion of women.

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students

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whose first

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was not

English

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or who were born overseas were more common in science-related departments. In terms of gender,

English

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and Modern Languages had the highest proportions of female

students

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(72% and 68%, respectively). The figure for History was slightly over half at 52%,

while

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women were a minority in Physics (56%), Mathematics (17%), and Chemistry (15%). Regarding

language

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background, non-native

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speakers were most represented in Mathematics (49%) and History (45%), compared to only 12–16% in

language

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departments.

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, overseas

students

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made up the majority in Physics and Mathematics (56% each) and were least common in

English

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(20%) and Modern Languages (23%).

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Varied vocabulary

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The table below gives informarion about students studying in six departures at a Australian university in 2011

. In modern times, children are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?

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