The pie charts below show the share of the Swiss Watch Market by brand in 2009 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the share of the Swiss Watch Market by brand in 2009 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The pie charts below show the share of the Swiss Watch Market by brand in 2009 and 2019. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts demonstrate the proportions of Swiss watch market
brand
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brands
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over a period of 10 years from 2009 to 2019. The measures are represented as a percentage.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that
the
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conventional TV had the highest share in 2009,
while
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it became the lowest share holder in 2019.
To begin
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with, Conventional TV accounted for almost one-third
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in 2009, which dropped drastically to 4% in 2019.
Similarly
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, Laptops and Desktop computers had a negligible difference between them in the early period of time, which had 20% and 18% respectively. Over a decade, both have taken
significant
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decline, which stands for 12% each.
On the other hand
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, Mobile phones and tablets
share
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an increased
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increased
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by
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of
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11% and 14% respectively
in
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over
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the
ten
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past ten
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years. The most noticeable growth was
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by Flat-screen
T.V
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TVs
, which surged by almost one-fifth over 10 years.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • brand
  • watch
  • market
  • share
  • chart
  • charts
  • year
  • 2009
  • 2019
  • top
  • leading
  • major
  • minor
  • grow
  • rise
  • increase
  • fall
  • decrease
  • change
  • compare
  • between
  • in
  • over
  • period
  • account for
  • represent
  • hold
  • dominate
  • dominant
  • diverse
  • variety
  • concentrated
  • slight
  • significant
  • percent
  • percentage
  • almost
  • nearly
  • largest
  • second
  • third
  • others
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