your friend is celebrating her birthday soon and has invited you to a party, but you are unable to come because you are going to attend an important meeting that day . write a letter to your friend an thank her for the invitation explain wgy you cannot come propose to meet on other day .

Dear Mary. I hope you are doing well. I want to sincerely thank you for inviting me to your party. I’m writing to say how sorry I am for missing your birthday celebration
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week. I know it was an important day for you, and I feel bad that I couldn’t be there to celebrate with you. The reason I missed your party was because I had to attend an important meeting with my company on that day. The meeting was about a renewable energy project involving wind, solar, and hydropower.
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project aims to help protect the environment, improve air quality, and reduce pollution.
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, it plays a vital role in improving public health and minimizing diseases. To make it up to you, I’d love to take you out for dinner sometime
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weekend. It would be a great opportunity for me to properly celebrate your birthday and spend some time together. Please let me know when you’re available. Once again, I’m truly sorry for missing your special day, and I promise to be more thoughtful next time. Sincerely, Mr. Luan

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The letter fits the task. It says thank you, says why you cannot come, and offers to meet later.
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One idea per paragraph helps. The first part is both thanks and sorry; try to split these into two lines or two paragraphs.
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The reason is a bit long. Make it short and clear.
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In the end, give a clear plan. A date or place makes it easier to fix.
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It thanks and says sorry for missing the party.
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It gives a reason and a plan to meet later.
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The tone is polite and the closing is good.
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