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The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.

The bar chart shows different methods of waste disposal in four cities: Toronto, Madrid, Kuala Lumpur and Amman. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the chart and making comparisons where appropriate.
The bar chart gives various types of
waste
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disposing
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 methods for four cities.
Overall
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,
landfill
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 is the most used
method
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 in Toronto and Amman
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while
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 incineration is the most
utilized
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utilised
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 technic in
Madrid
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 and
Kuala
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Lumpur
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.
However
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, compositing is the least popular one among
methods
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the methods
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 for given cities. In Toronto, almost 75
percent
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per cent
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 of
waste
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disposes
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is disposed
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with
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of with
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landfill
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the landfill
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method
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whereas
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, whereas
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compositing
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composting
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 is used
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percentage
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at a rate
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 of just over 5 in
waste
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disposing
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disposal
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.
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Landfill
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The landfill
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method
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 is
also
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 the most widespread
method
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 to dispose
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of wastes
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wastes
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waste
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 in Amman
but
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, but
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percentage
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the percentage
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 of
landfill
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method
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 usage is almost a third less than in Toronto. The
percentage
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 of the incineration
method
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 is just under two-fifths.
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, just over 10% of
waste
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disposes
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is disposed
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with
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of with
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recycling
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the recycling
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method
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, nearly 5% of
waste
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 is disposed
by
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of by
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the compositing
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compositing
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composting
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method
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. The highest percentages of
waste
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 disposed
by
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of by
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incineration
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the incineration
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method
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 are 40%, and almost 55% in
Madrid
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,
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apply
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 and
in
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apply
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Kuala
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Lumpur
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, respectively.
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The Recycyling
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Recycyling
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recycling
method
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 is used with
equal
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an equal
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percentage
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 of
waste
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with
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, with
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 just above 20% in both
Madrid
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 and
Kuala
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Lumpur
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. The
percentage
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 of
waste
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 disposed
by
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of by
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compositing
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composting
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 is nearly 9% in
Madrid
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, and it is 5% in
Kuala
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Lumpur
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, landfill, method, madrid, kuala, lumpur, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste disposal
  • method
  • recycling
  • incineration
  • landfill
  • composting
  • comparison
  • similarity
  • difference
  • variation
  • percentage
  • bar chart
  • trend
  • dominant
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • proportion
  • city
  • data
  • figure
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