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The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University.

The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University.
The pie charts illustrate the distribution of
students
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 at North West University across faculties, and present the origins of
arts
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students
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.
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,
arts
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, computing, and science were the most popular faculties,
while
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 the majority of
arts
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students
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 were South American. With regard to
students
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 by faculty, enrolment in
arts
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, computing, and science exceeded 20% each, with
arts
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 slightly higher at 23%.
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 was followed by computing at 22% and science at 21%.
By comparison
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, the percentage of people who joined business school stood at 14%, compared with 9% for engineering. As for law and medicine, both had similar figures and recorded the lowest enrolments, at 6% and 5%, respectively. In terms of the nationality of
arts
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students
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, excluding those from the US, more than three-quarters were South American (79%). Those who came from Europe accounted for approximately three times as many as Asians, at 21% versus 6%.
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, Australians and Africans formed the minority, with each group representing less than 5%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, arts with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enrollment
  • demographics
  • percentages
  • academic year
  • trends
  • gender distribution
  • faculties
  • departments
  • domestic
  • international
  • academic disciplines
  • economic conditions
  • scholarship
  • reputation
  • growth
  • parity
  • data analysis
  • popularity
  • external factors
  • predictive modeling
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