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Nowadays the way many people intract with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development.

In the digitalization era, technology plays a vital role in our
life
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 and it
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 become part and parcel in our lives. Technology has changed the style of interaction of many individuals
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compared to earlier.
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 new gadgets have affected the lives of
people
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 them sedentary but I believe that technology has reduced the problems of many
people
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 their
relationship
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relationships
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 stronger.
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communication between
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two
people
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 and built their relationship
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stronger than ever . To explain it, earlier
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habitats
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 used to talk through a landline or a letter, but now they can use their mobile phone
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such
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, such
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 as
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an Iphone
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Iphone
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iPhone
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, Samsung and many more. It helped them to talk within
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seconds even if they are sitting far away from each other.
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, one person is living in
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 and another is in Gujarat, they can effortlessly communicate through a call or a video call.
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, it helped them to interact on
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 basis. On the other side, the negative development of
this
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 trend is
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 in-person interactions. To specify, it
reduce
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 the interaction between the person, which can create
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conflicts between them.
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, it can create
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jealousy
among
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the
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 person.
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,
people
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 who
are
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 not
meeting
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 on a daily
basis
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apply
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or
a
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weekly
,
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 they have less

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task response
Make your answer clear. Start with a short opening, then two body parts for each idea, and end with a short finish.
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Give a real example for each idea. This helps show you can use ideas well.
coherence
Put ideas in a clear order. Use linking words to show how ideas relate.
language
Watch grammar and spelling. Use short, direct sentences.
content
You talk about both the good and bad sides of tech in relationships.
structure
You give simple examples to show how it helps people talk fast even when far.
style
You try to use easy words and clear meaning.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interact
  • global connectivity
  • social media platforms
  • real-time communication
  • online dating apps
  • telecommuting
  • remote work
  • in-person interactions
  • video calls
  • instant messaging
  • long-distance relationships
  • digital communication
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