The charts below give information on the ages fo the population of Yeman and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wher relevant.

The charts below give information on the ages fo the population of Yeman and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wher relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below give information on the ages fo the population of Yeman and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons wher relevant.
The provided pie charts illustrate the ages of demographics of two nations – Yemen and Italy – in 2000, with the predictions for 2050.
Overall
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, people between 15 and 59
years
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old contributed as the top age group in Italy in 2000 and
is
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are
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estimated to be the largest proportion
so
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, so
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did Yemen in 2050,
while
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the biggest share of people in
Yamen
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Yemen
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in 2000
are
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was
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still the
childrens
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children
. When it comes to
ages
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age
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distribution in Yamen, apparently
childrens
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children
under 14
years
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old made up 50.1% as the highest percentage in 2000, followed by the individuals between 15 and 59
years
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, with 5% lower,
then
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the
elderlies
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elderly
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accounted
the
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for the
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lowest share for only 3.6%.
However
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, the 15-59 age group is projected to have a tenth growth, making it
become
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apply
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the
dominating
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dominant
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one. Turning to Italy, the percentages might fluctuate in the prediction, but the ranking of age groups will not change. The people in the range of 15 to 59
years
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old represented
for
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apply
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exactly 61.6% in 2000, though having approximately
15
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a 15
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% reduction after 50
years
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, still made up the biggest proportion. The
childrens
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children
and
elderlies
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the elderly
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are the second and third place consistently, with almost a quarter and about 15% in 2000, and estimated 42.3% and 11.5% in 2050, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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