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The maps give information about a university sports court.

The maps give information about a university sports court.
the
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 maps provide data regarding
of
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a university sports
court
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 , and compare
this
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 place today with 25 years ago .
Overall
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 , the site underwent
to
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several changes throughout the period . The
park
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 and car
park
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 have been demolished , which
they
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apply
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were in the
northern east
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northeast
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 and
southern west
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southwest
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 respectively . and a tennis
court
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 has been converted and expanded , and
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a
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fitness centre has been constructed in the previous location of
tennis
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the tennis
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court
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 .
Firstly
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 , the
sport
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sports
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court
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 has been changed in shape from
rectangualr
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rectangular
 to square .
While
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 the western side of the
court
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 has been changed significantly . There was a
park
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 and a car
park
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 below it .
However
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 , the
park
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 has been converted into
basketball
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a basketball
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court
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 ,
whereas
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 the car
park
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 has
replaced
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been replaced
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 by
tennis
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a tennis
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 stadium . Turning to the opposite side , the outdoor pool has been changed to
indoor
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an indoor
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and
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one and
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 both of cafe and reception were
remained
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retained
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 in the same location ,
while
Linking Words
changing
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the changing
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 room has been shifted above the fitness centre.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words court, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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