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The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course 'very good'. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the results of a survey of first-year students taking various courses at a particular university. It shows how many of the students considered various aspects of their course 'very good'. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates
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survey's
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the survey
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results
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 of first-year
students
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 who were taking different courses at a certain university. It depicts
students
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'
opinion
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opinions
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 about their courses.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
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apply
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all aspects of the
course
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namely
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, namely
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Commerce
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Commerce,
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 were appealing to many
students
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. All categories of the
course
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 of Economics showed decent
results
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,
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except
 Pre-
course
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 information and Resources (Print and Other). When it comes to Law,
students
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 of
this
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course
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 were not fully satisfied with all of its aspects, since its
results
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 were not as high as remained courses. Starting with Economics,
students
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 were satisfied with its Teaching quality (95%) and Tutor support (92%),
while
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 the reverse was true for Pre-
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 information and Resources (print and other)
with
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, with
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 55%, 59%, 62% respectively.
Students
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 who took the
course
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 - Commerce gave positive reviews about all the factors of the
course
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.
Course
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 introduction and Quality of teaching dominated with 95%, Tutor support
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followed
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 with 93%. When it comes to remaining aspects, Resources (print and other), they showed similar
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, at 81% and 86%
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accordingly
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respectively
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.
Last
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 but not least,
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course
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the course
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 of Law showed comparable percentages in each aspect, resulting in an average score of 73,6%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words results, students, course with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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