The two given pie charts
illustrates
the consumption mannerisms of individuals in the UK in the years 2001 and 1971.
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illustrate
Overall
, we can notice that there is a huge difference in the charts. Linking Words
It is clear that
cars were the highest bought item in 2001, Linking Words
where
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whereas
it
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apply
was food
in 1971, Correct word order
food was
as
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and
for
the Change preposition
apply
lowest
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least
used
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bought
goods
, books Check wording
items
for
2001 and computers Change preposition
in
for
1971.
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in
According to
the data shown, in 2001, furniture and petrol had a similar population with 8%, and the same goes for food and restaurants with 14%, as for desktops it had 12%, Linking Words
whereas
we stated before, books were not preferred by many.
As for 1971, edibles were more popular than vehicles with a change of 22%. Linking Words
On the other hand
, diners and home equipment were least Linking Words
favored
by the people Change the spelling
favoured
with
a percentage of 9% and 7%, respectively. As for textbooks and Punctuation problem
, with
gas
the variation was 4 Add a comma
gas,
rate
.Check wording
per cent