In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, living alone has become increasingly common among individuals.
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there are several drawbacks associated with
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lifestyle, I strongly believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. One significant advantage of living solo is that it encourages independence and promotes self-growth.
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, when I lived alone in the UK a few years ago, I had to learn how to cook healthy meals and even how to replace a light bulb by myself.
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, having personal space allowed me to meditate peacefully without interruptions, which greatly contributed to my recovery from a long-term mental health challenge.
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, I developed many essential life skills that have helped me become more confident and self-reliant.
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, one of the main drawbacks of living alone is the financial burden. The average citizen in Saudi Arabia earns a minimum wage of around six to eight thousand Saudi Riyals per month,
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the rent for a one-bedroom apartment is approximately the same amount.
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makes living alone too expensive for those earning minimum wage, who represent the majority of the population.
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, financial challenges prevent many individuals from affording the luxury of having their own home. In conclusion, despite the valid concern that not everyone can afford to live independently, the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages. The opportunity to become more self-sufficient and to enhance one’s personal habits can be successfully achieved through living peacefully on one’s own.

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