You recently took part in a training course. The organiser of the course has asked you for some feedback. Write a letter to the organiser of the course. In your letter: • give details of the course you took part in • say what you found useful on the course • suggest ways the course could be improved

Dear Mr Brown, I hope

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message finds you well. I recently participated in your training course about “How to develop better communication skills at the workplace”. Even though the training took place from the 7th to the

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17th

of October, it was just enough to meet new interesting people from different work backgrounds.

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, the session was motivating

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, and

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I got many useful communication skills that I will be using at my job.

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, the group assignments helped me understand how different companies work

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, and

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I will definitely recommend some practices to my colleagues. In order to make the course better, I would recommend using speakers

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who

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have

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a business

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background and could give the participants ideas that work in the market.

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this

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thing will make the participants more motivated, because they will hear about other people’s experiences. Thank you for creating

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useful course. Yours sincerely, Anna Mayers

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Nov 10, 2025

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task response

Be more clear when you give the course name and dates, and add exact facts about what you did

grammar

Fix little grammar and use simple words in the right way

coherence

Keep one idea in one paragraph and use links to show how ideas go

presentation

Make the start and end of the letter easy to read and clean

tone

Polite and respectful tone

content

Clear aim to say what was useful

structure

Nice closing with thanks

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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