You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the council. In your letter say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter in regard to the news of building a new shopping centre
near Surrey central. I have heard this
news from your interview which you gave last
Monday on the radio as well as
most of the people are talking about the new building project.
I am very delighted by listening to this
news as in our local area we do have a shopping centre
Add the comma(s)
, as well as people,
as well as
people have to go to the metro town to do their shopping and it almost takes 1 hour to get there which wastes a lot of time travelling.In addition
to this
, it will provide many employment opportunities to the people living in the area and they don’t have to go to other areas in search of jobs.
I would be interested in finding out more information about the shopping centre
as I want to know about the exact location as well as
the exact
time period for building the shopping centre
.
Thank you for your cooperation and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea and clearly elaborates on it, avoiding unnecessary information.
coherence cohesion
Strengthen the logical structure by using a wider range of cohesive devices and clear topic sentences that guide the reader through your arguments.
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Fully develop your ideas and provide specific examples or suggestions to enhance task achievement and engage the reader more effectively.
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Maintain a consistent formal tone throughout the letter and ensure proper use of punctuation for enhanced readability.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite