Some people believe the government should have total control over the education system, while others think that private institutions should be given more freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some people argue that the responsibility for controlling the

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system

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should be

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the

government

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, others believe that private institutions should be given more freedom. In my opinion,

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the

role

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of private

schools

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is important, the

government

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plays a more crucial

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in managing the

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system

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on a large scale. On the one hand, the supporters of private institutions’

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claim that those

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provide more choices for students. Parents and their children can choose suitable

schools

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depending on their preference and budget.

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of being limited to one choice, students can attend private institutions

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as Vinschool or other international

schools

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. The advocates of

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view

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point out that private

schools

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tend to adopt new teaching methodologies faster. So, if each institution performs

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roles effectively,

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will contribute to an innovative and dynamic

education

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system

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.

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, the

government

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has the capacity to manage the

education

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system

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on a national level. Only the authorities have the

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to set the general curriculum framework and appropriate standards for the

education

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system

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.

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, textbooks will be published under

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government

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censorship to guarantee consistency and accuracy across the country.

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, the

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accounts for

quality

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control - monitoring and evaluating the

quality

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of teachers and facilities nationwide.

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, the

overall

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quality

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of

education

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is maintained across educational establishments. In conclusion, both private

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and the

government

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have an essential

role

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to play in

education

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.

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the

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takes on the responsibility for setting

standard

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standards

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and controlling the

quality

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of national

education

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, private

schools

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should be offered a greater degree/level of freedom to meet the diverse needs of

education

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.