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You recently took part in a training course. The organiser of the course has asked for some feedback. Write a letter to the organiser of the course. In your letter: ●give details of the course you took part in ●say what you found useful on the course ●suggest ways the course could be improved

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 Potter, I am writing to thank you for the Communication and Speaking Skills course I attended from September to December 2024. It was a truly valuable experience that helped me improve both my clarity and confidence when speaking. As someone who works in sales, learning how to express ideas more convincingly has been extremely beneficial in my daily interactions with clients. The techniques we learned for gesturing, body language, maintaining eye contact, and using tone effectively have already made a noticeable difference in my communication style. I especially appreciated the engaging atmosphere throughout the sessions. I have no complaints about the course, but I would suggest adding more practice-based lessons.
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, short pair activities where two participants speak one after another, followed by
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 feedback, would make the sessions even more interactive and helpful. Thank you once again for
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 an excellent and practical course.
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 truly, Cristina.

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strength
Your letter keeps a clear aim and uses a good mix of facts and ideas. Keep this strength.
improvement
Fix small errors like 'Your’s' to 'Yours' and try to split long paragraphs into two or three parts.
improvement
Add a bit more detail about how the course was run (online or in person) and the number of sessions.
improvement
Always keep a polite and formal tone and be precise with dates.
content
Clear reason for writing and thanks at the start.
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Good example of useful points and a real suggestion for improvement.
tone
Polite and professional closing.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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