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The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008

The table below gives information about student enrolments at Bristol University in 1928, 1958 and 2008
The table illustrates about enrolments of
students
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 at
Bristol
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 University in three particular years, which are 1928, 1958, and 2008.
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, the percentage of
students
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 who came from within 30 miles of
Bristol
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 decreased significantly along given
times
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.
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, the
students
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that
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who
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 come from abroad rose almost six times.
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in 1928, half of
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Bristol
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Bristol's
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 citizens, who lived 30 miles from
Bristol
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 University,
study
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studied
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 in
this
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 high degree facility, and it was considered
as
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the highest figure. The number decreased to 14
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percents
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per cent
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 in 1958, and eventually
plummet
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plummeted
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down
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apply
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to two
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percents
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per cent
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 only. Meanwhile, only 5
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percents
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per cent of
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students
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 from three countries came from abroad and learned
in
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at
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Bristol
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 University.
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, the figure slightly
increase
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increased
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 to 6
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percents
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per cent
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,
that
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which
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consist
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consists
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 of
students
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 from 27 countries, in 30 years.
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 in 2008, the
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students
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apply
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percentage reached 28
percent
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per cent
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, who
is
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came from 98 countries, and
also
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 mentioned as the highest number from 1928 to 2008.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, bristol, percents with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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