The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts illustrate changes in the purchase of three electrical materials - washing machine, refrigerator, vacuum cleaner -

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the amount of time spent on housework per household in one country from 1920 to 2019.

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, the percentage of households owning all three furniture rose considerably over the period,

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the amount of time spent on housework fell sharply. Among the furnishings, refrigerators experience the fastest and most significant increase, eventually reaching universal buying. In 1920, only %30 had a vacuum cleaner, fewer than % 10% had a refrigerator , and around % 40% had a washing machine. Over the following decades, refrigerators reached %100 control in 1980, and after that , vacuum cleaners reached %100 control in 2000.

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washing machines reached less than %80 in 2019. Taking everything into account, weekly housework hours dropped from approximately 50 hours in 1920 to under 20 hours in 2019. For the reason that people started to use time-saving apparatus rather than old household appliances.

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Nov 19, 2025

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

165 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

ownership
electrical appliances
housework
time frame
variables
trends
significant milestones
turning points
correlation
reduction
influenced
societal implications
quality of life
gender roles
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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start

Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around.

It is common that in many companies people from different ages work together in a same team. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantges?

Instructions Read the question below and write a letter.   You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start