Instructions Read the question below and write a letter.   You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest

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the announced part-time position at your

golf

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club. I have read in the newspaper about the requirements needed and

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thrilled to apply for the job. My name is James Hook, I am a college student in my senior year at the

university

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of Thuffs. I live in the university

dormity

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dormitory

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located about 3 km away from your

golf

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court. From a very young age, I was introduced to the

golf

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fields, since my father was a member

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our local home town club.

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, to that I had trained and practiced

golf

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during high school.

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made me familiar with the various tools, preparations and organizing of the

golf

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kit.

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also

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helped me in developing many skills

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as time management and concentration.

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, I can assure you that I am a good fit

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this

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role.

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, I am ready to start working from next week. I am available from the 20th of October. Please do not hesitate to

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contact

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me via email

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[email protected], if any additional information is required. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, James Hook.

dr.waffa1459Sat May 03 2025

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coherence and cohesion

Make sure to check grammatical errors and clarify your phrases for better understanding.

task achievement

Include more details about your skills, such as specific tasks you’re capable of performing at the golf club.

task achievement

You introduced yourself effectively and provided relevant background information.

task achievement

The letter maintains a polite and formal tone throughout, suitable for a job application.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

201 words

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Instructions Read the question below and write a letter. You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

write a discharge letter,

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Instructions Read the question below and write a letter.   You are looking for a part-time job at a golf club. Write a letter to the manager of the golf club. In your letter, introduce yourself explain what experience and special skills you have tell him/her when you could start