The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne.

The table illustrates the most famous fast food consumed in Melbourne in percentages and

units

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between 2005 and 2025.

Overall

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, studied fast foods studied are

hamburger

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, fried

chicken

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, salad, fried rice and noodles. It displays in

units

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as well as

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percentages. Both

hamburger

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and fried

chicken

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were the highest ,

while

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fried rice and noodles were the

next,

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whereas

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salad was the lowest unit. In 2005, the highest were

hamburger

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and fried

chicken

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consumption were 40 and 35

units

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, which next ones were fried rice and noodles , both having 6

units

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, and the lowest was salad , with 5

units

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. In 2025, leading

hamburger

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and fried

chicken

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restaurants are noticeably increased to 51 and 45

units

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, where the next most popular foods are

also

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increased slightly to 9

units

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whereas

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the least favoured one rocketed up to 41

units

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Nov 23, 2025

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words units, hamburger, chicken with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

140 words

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