the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and

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of

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that closed and opened in the same country, in the years ranging from 2011 to 2018.

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, it is clear from the graph that the

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of new

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saw a considerable increase and

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declined over the

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, in 2016 and 2017, the

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of closed

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was almost similar,

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the

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of new

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opened was

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equivalent.

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what is shown,

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with, in 2011, 8500

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opened, and

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saw a significant decline, reaching nearly 4000

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opened by 2012.

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, in 2015, 2016, and 2017, the

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of modern

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opened was equivalent, at 4,000. In terms of closed

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, it started with approximately 6500 in 2011,

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it increased to 7000 in 2012.

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, the

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of closed

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experienced a considerable decrease, to almost 0 by 2015.

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it rose afterwards and the figure of closed

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stayed similar in the

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three periods.