the graph below shows the number of shops that closed and

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number

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of

closures

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and openings of several

shops

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from 2011 to 2018.

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, both

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and openings experienced a downward trend with some fluctuations during the period.

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with, the

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of opening

shops

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were

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more than 8,500, higher than

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closures

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the closures

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in 2011.

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,

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the numbers decreased in 2 years after, it bounced back to around 6,000

shops

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in 2014. From 2015, 4,000

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were opened and remained

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in 2016.

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of the period, opening

shops

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continued to decrease

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than 3,000

shops

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.

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, the

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of

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closures

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closed

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shops

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below the openings, and continued to decrease in 2012. Evidently, it grew for almost 7,000

shops

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closed in 2013,

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it plummeted by less than 1,000

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in 2015.

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number

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of

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began to increase in 2018

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it continued to increase

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of the period, exceeding the

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of opening

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shops

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shop

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openings.

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