The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010-2017

The line chart compares the
number
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of travellers attending Caribbean
Island
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Islands
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from 2010 to 2017, measured in millions. From an
overall
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look, there was an upward trend in total travellers visiting.
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the highest increase in visitors was experienced by the cruise ships sector, the opposite can be been for the
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of those who are staying on the island. Starting in 2010, there were only one million people visiting
this
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islet.
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three-fourths of them decided to disembark on the isle, a quarter of a million tourists remained on their liners. The segment for those who rested on their cruises
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fluctuated between 0.25 and 1.5 for the next 3 years. Reef stayers,
on the other hand
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, experienced a stable status in the figure for the first 2 years before increasing rapidly to 1.25 in 2012 and 1.5 in 2013.
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this
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reason, the total
number
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of individuals who travelled to
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land increased gradually to 2 by the year 2013. In the second half of the period, the data of people who stopped by the reef did not witness any increasing trend between 2013 and 2017, but a slight decrease to 1.5 in 2016 before recovering back to 2 in 2017. Cruiser ships to
this
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island had skyrocketed in the
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of customers, beating the islanders in 2016 and increasing to 2 in 2017. Ultimately, the total value climbed from 2 to 3.5 over four years.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • trough
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • steady increase
  • sharp decline
  • seasonal variation
  • cruise ship visitors
  • island stay visitors
  • economic impact
  • environmental impact
  • tourism industry
  • sustainable tourism
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